slow 1 4 amcut

hey all, did my second slow dance for amcut ( told her i would do some and post 2) as she inspires me to want to slow it down a bit, ➡️ but looking for feedback/tips/advice from anyone/everyone 💣 🥂 😉 tried to post link here but copy/cut would not work so idk, but check it out and let me know what u did / didnt like thanks @! it will be appreciated 🌸 🌸 🌸 ☀️